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I just wonder
When we'll say goodbye
I just wonder
if you forsaking me
instead of these
forever farewells
will cease the pain
I just wonder
if it could possibly too late
too dug up in eachother's thoughts
to be uprooted
I just wonder
if we could go back
to that past we always dreamed of
to forget
about this word
of 'us'
and yet
I just wonder
if I make up these
illusions of hate
to not face the truth
that I really do despise
because it's too late now
I just wonder
if we're going to be stuck like this
forever
©2008-2009 ~Frail-star
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Gah, not the best
but not the worst, either
not like my first one DX
I didn't feel like I put much depth into this one, but I suppose it gets the point across

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:icontwilightpoetess:
*sighs* Always stuck between hate and love, the constant struggle against finding yourself in another person's eyes and losing yourself along the way, losing what it means to love and cherish them. It's a common ending to the strongest of loves...and it always hurts. Excellent piece.

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I've always known that I'd be trapped;
the world outside no longer shows.
And here, within this dream, I'm caught...
the Lady of the Blackened Rose.


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that's exactly what I was thinking, thank you for clarifiying it so beautifully

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the digging and uprooting imagery is very interesting here :D
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thank you :) I liked that part, personally, as well

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